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A short snippet 2 by superchaoticboom, literature

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A short snippet 2

Under the cover of an extra-large military cap stood an extremely tall, androgynous young male. Brown caramel bangs curved to the right of his forehead along the wavy flaxen-tipped forelocks framing down his cheek. The overhead lights beam glared against his mirrored wraparound shades. The leather cuffs and dark nail polish made his pale skin pop further. In fact, what seemed to make him stand out wasn’t his choice of clothes: a short-sleeve cross-front T-shirt underneath a hooded zip-up long jacket, studded belt looped in his cotton cargo pants, and studded pyramid high-top sneakers—but that he wore all black in a barely ventilat

A short snippet by superchaoticboom, literature

Interview with my Character by superchaoticboom, literature

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Interview with my Character

My knee bounced in anticipation. The beautiful decor of the room made it more of a lavish master bedroom suite: The walls skillfully layered in shades of red with black were detailed in giving the appearance of outer space. Above was skylight and below the hard wooden floor was covered in an oriental rug. Bolted behind the black leather fainting couch and the leather sofa chaise longue were two beautiful fake thin trees. The bed was understandably king-sized with burgundy spread embroidered gold and matching thick pillows. There was a large dresser drawer with a beautiful Gothic framed mirror above it. To the left of me stood a long floor la

Prologue to a possible beginning by superchaoticboom, literature

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Prologue to a possible beginning

Their eyes only ever bother to scan the surface, thought Ryuunosuke Kaito, as he made his way to the crowded street and into wide-spaced park. Known simply as Ryo to most-both as a nickname and because his name was generally a mouthful to foreigners-The curious looks and side glances. It wasn't the fact that he was rocking his own specially-made all black Gothic-punk chic look: A mesh tank top underneath an asymmetric zip-up top, Key rings and chains hung off the loops of his pyramid studded belted cargo pants , and pyramid studded high-top sneakers in nearly ninety-five degree weather. It wasn't from the heavy old-school boombox set effortle

Make sure he's not like me by superchaoticboom, literature

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Make sure he's not like me

Make sure he's not like me, Daddy loves you, but best believe: Any wrong he does to you, take some thought before you forgive. Whether he's smoking, drinking, or whatever it is. If you know you can't accept his ways then walk away and choose to live. We all love you, baby girl, so here I am asking-no telling you: Make sure he gives you room to breathe, That he won't ever begrudge your needs, He won't be quick to anger or lie, He's faithful, true, and holds you high. Just make sure he's not like me, Or else first thing you do is leave.

Analysis of Characters by superchaoticboom, literature

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Analysis of Characters

Character Analysis ~A character's role can be changed in regards to the story ~Main Characters The core cast of primary regular, central characters mainly focused on & seen. AKA the main protagonist & associates: friends, family, love, allies, villains, etc. If there's more than one main protagonist, they easily take turns with center stage. Any main character(s) can have a lesser role in the story for whatever reason… Sick, absent at the time, busy with things, moved away, deceased, etc… If moved away or deceased- are usually only rarely called or remembered. By not centering on the main protagonist, other main characters

Lament of undying hopefulness by superchaoticboom, literature

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Lament of undying hopefulness

To yearn for thou is pain. To think of thou brings wounds to mine chest… 'tis every intention of mine to hold thou in mine arms. But alas, thou pushes me away…Yet thine name on mine lips doth holds hope. Verily, I roam beyond shadows seeking refuge from falling to temptation. The temptation of mine body responding to the warmth of another… Lest I will only take the one for all that she is at the time: lust. A tool to banish pain. Physically, I say. Emotionally, the pain remains unceasing. Never subsiding. For it hurts lying that she is thou…In the form of another woman… That if I think of thee as I am with

Guide to Storytelling #2 by superchaoticboom, literature

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Guide to Storytelling #2

The Absolute no! Contradiction & Inconsistency: ~All Storyline & FAQ, confirmed in story or not, must be made canon If you or some other artist, makes an illustration of your character, make sure it looks exactly like what the description says. Don't change your mind on what you originally said the character looks like in your book, just because you think the artwork looks better than what you first imagined…Unless you decide on making it as an "As the years go by/Epilogue" kind of illustration… If you had two people dating in your book, and after the series has ended, you make it in your guide book to where they broke up ye

Guide to Storytelling #1 by superchaoticboom, literature

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Guide to Storytelling #1

First Appearances are everything! (Really!) A good author should never give a character indeterminate canon *State a character's skin tone, descent & gender in the first book they appear in.** ~Facial features, physique, eye color, hair color & style, fashion, voice, accent, etc. ~Estimated age, even aura and scent is something to notice! ***Don't use particular words for character describing if unable to prove your point… *It only takes maybe four sentences more or less to do so, your entire book won't be ruined if you do this…Surely if an author can put enough detail on a side/minor character you might not ever see again,

Within the mind of my heart once again by superchaoticboom, literature

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Within the mind of my heart once again

The warmth of tears silently flow, from off my chin and jaw, For the longest I wondered, if my steel ice heart would thaw. And then I met you… An angel in pure disguise. Towards me you flew, And my heart did arise. You taught me how to love again. My heart said God had blessed me with 'the one'… But I became afraid of losing you, my beloved friend, Thus repeating that which left me undone. One of my favorite scriptures above all else is 1 Corinthians 13, The keys helping me learn what true love is supposed to mean. But I let the chains of fear, sadness, and envy still hold me down… It locks me into place in its ch

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A short snippet 2 by superchaoticboom, literature

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Interview with my Character

Prologue to a possible beginning by superchaoticboom, literature

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Prologue to a possible beginning

Make sure he's not like me by superchaoticboom, literature

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Make sure he's not like me

Analysis of Characters by superchaoticboom, literature

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Analysis of Characters

Lament of undying hopefulness by superchaoticboom, literature

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Lament of undying hopefulness

Guide to Storytelling #2 by superchaoticboom, literature

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Guide to Storytelling #1 by superchaoticboom, literature

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Guide to Storytelling #1

Within the mind of my heart once again by superchaoticboom, literature

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Within the mind of my heart once again

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Artist // Hobbyist // Varied

Jan 13
Deviant for 17 years
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She / Her

My Bio

Favorite Bible Verse: 1 Corinthians 13:4-8 & 13.

Description (Physical & internal): "She was rather average looking; not anything that she'd deem pretty or beautiful when it came to her looks. But if she liked anything physical about herself, it was the length of her hair and its color.
A shy,quiet,soft-spoken girl with a strangely high-pitched childish voice. She had the sweet kindness of her mother (as she was often told) and the artistic/musical talents of her father (however she considered herself talentless). She was hard working when she wanted to be and was easily forgetful on serious matters. She often made promises she couldn't keep due to her own laziness, forgetfulness, or nervousness.
She was easily angered, yet slowly forgiving and regretful. Her self-proclaimed nickname was "That heart sleeve girl", because she knew her facial expressions were usually that of worry or annoyance around others. But that was probably her loneliness or anxieties showing itself.
Always the one to be a bundle of nerves around people, mainly the opposite sex. She was filled with paranoia, self-consciousness, self-pity, and would constantly critique herself badly. She had many phobias,most of which involved fears of failure,dying painfully, 1)falling in love and 2)not receiving love.
1) because she didn't think she was good enough for it, and 2) because she didn't think that anyone could truly love her despite her flaws.
Which roughly translated revealed her fear of dying alone.
In fact, it was fear that was her main downfall."

Personal Quote: Once you choose to use the blessings bestowed upon you for good, you give more meanng in life.

Favourite Visual Artist

Tetsuya Nomura, Takashi Murakami, Tooko Miyagi, Shingo Nanami, Matsuri Hino, Ema Toyama, Kyousuke Motomi, Takeshi Obata, Masashi Kishimoto, Tite Kubo, Rumiko Takahashi, CLAMP, Salvador Larroca, Shane Davis, John Buscema, Many many others & artists on DA!

Favourite Movies

Spirited Away, Jack and the Cuckoo-Clock Heart, A Silent Voice, Liz and The Blue Bird, Black Panther, Crazy Rich Asians, Spider-Man: Into The Spider Verse, Deadpool, Doctor Strange, Avengers: Endgame.

Favourite TV Shows

Free! Iwatobi series, Fruits Basket (reboot), Violet Evergarden, Michiko and Hatchin, Carole and Tuesday, Gargoyles, Young Justice, Gravity Falls, Star Vs. Evil, Miraculous Ladybug, Moomin Valley, Bojack Horseman, Rick and Morty, mostly K-dramas...

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

BTS, Stray Kids, NCT/WayV, Jay Park, MYA's Agus & Maxi, Tauren Wells, Khalid, Weeknd, Juice WRLD, Jesse McCartney...

Favourite Books

To All The Boys I've Loved Before trilogy, Children of Blood and Bone, The Sun Is Also A Star, Crazy Rich Asians, The Boy with the Cuckoo-Clock Heart..

Favourite Writers

Cassandra Clare, J.R. Ward, Kevin Kwan, Jenny Han, Tomi Adeyemi, Nicola Yoon.

Favourite Games

Kingdom Hearts series, Final Fantasy, Sonic The Hedgehog.

Favourite Gaming Platform

Sega Genesis, Gamecube, Playstation3, PSP, Nintendo DS.

Tools of the Trade

Pen/Pencil, paper, typing.

Other Interests

Collecting and skimming through books before reading; discussing with my friends the many ignored cliches and flaws of the media.

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Dec 15, 2014

A change in life...

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I don't know how to say this...but I need help. Like, serious, emotional help. For my strength as a person. Nearly all of my life I have been a past dweller. And like my mother pointed out before she left I have so much pent up sadness and anger and drama-fueled issues that I still have yet to deal with. I'm afraid to. All of it stems from my childhood...Though billions of people worldwide have gone through so worse things than I ever had... Reflecting back on my life now, it's why I can still be so cold hearted and passive-aggressive and distrusting and skeptical. Towards my family and my friends--the people who genuinely care about me.

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superchaoticboom

Nov 27, 2011

How to love...

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Hello everyone. I hope you all have had a good Thanksgiving...Well mine was...*sigh* something. Have you ever prayed for a miracle to happen in your life, something that seems too good to be true? Well, that's what happened to me... A month and two days ago I met this guy at campus. And somehow I was able to get the courage and speak to him first...And surprisingly for strangers, we were having very deep conversations. And we liked each other so much (or I liked him that fast) we exchanged cell numbers & e-mail. Then after that, everything just clicked. We became super-fast friends, I even made a promise to him that we would be friends no

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May 27, 2011

My literature...Poems, Stories, etc.

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Hello everyone. It's been a very long time since I last wrote a journal...About 4 years! Anyways...I hope you all are well... *Sighs* I guess I'm just really very nervous...you see, I've been writing poems and stories for about 6 years, and maybe 2 months ago by a mysterious force I was compelled to put my poems up on DA...(Really, I have no idea what made me do it, it was unusual.) All the while I was worried about what people may think of them...Would they like or dislike it? Hate it or love it? Will they comment or critique it? Maybe both? ~azure-requiem (https://www.deviantart.com/azure-requiem) An amazingly talented artist (and one of my many best friends') has been the o